"Learning principles of video games are enhanced in online environments"
- Using James Paul Gee's Learning Principles of Games
- Statistical Information (xbox live)
- Opposition (common misconceptions)
Comment: Sounds like you have it together. Interesting topic. One suggestion would be to make sure you stay focused on your argument.
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Mike P. - Cybercrimes: Real vs Virtual
Types of crimes (real vs virtual)
How information is used (real vs virtual)
What cybercrimes are...
How to protect yourself.
What happened to Mike personally.
Comment: I'd tailor your argument to something along these lines "Cybercrimes make us more vulnerable to criminal activity and here's why: blah blah blah" Interesting topic.
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Lee - YouTube's Unique Roles: political activism and perpetuation of hate
Thesis: YouTube has revolutionized political activism and, in doing so, it has uniquely contributed to the perpetuation of hate, however inadvertently.
Why/How
Comment: Make your argument a little clearer by making it more precise. For example: "YouTube has revolutionized political activism and perpetuates hate." Stick to one or the other.
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Angela - Bridging the digital divide by using concepts of video games in education
To bridge the digital devide, students to be become actively involved in video games.
Gee's learning principles-------------------------------------------
Angela - Bridging the digital divide by using concepts of video games in education
To bridge the digital devide, students to be become actively involved in video games.
Digital Youth Network - Results
First Lego League
Great material and argument.
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Derek N. - Bridging the Digital Divide (mobile phones)
"mobile technologies (cellular phones) are positively affecting the digital divide"
Statistics
Problem
Solution
Content is king
E. Silva
Barriers: Education
McCann - mobile internet solving lack of book problem
Conclusion
Comment: Good argument, thesis, and content.
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Kristin D. - HOPE
Argument for K-7 program "Healthy Online Presence Education"
Teach kids not to bully and learn how to prevent being bullied.
Purpose and Goals
Implementation
Conclusion
Comment: Works for me.
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